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"Hey, you, stop! My brother shouted as he gave chase to the mysterious man.

The man noticed my brother and raced onto the train. My brother made a quick dash towards the train, just barely boarding.

"What'dya want with me?!" The man shouted.

"Give us the drug!" My brother demanded.

"What drug?" the man asked.

"The drug you used to turn my little brother into a dragon!" My brother replied.

"WHAT?!" The man thought out loud.

As the two bickered back and fourth, I noticed something about this guy.

"Bro, can I talk to you?" I asked.

"What? What's up, Akira?"

"Bro, that's not him."

"What do you mean 'that's not him'?" My brother asked.

"That's not the guy who did this to me. He's not that tall and...he doesn't have as scary a look as the other guy." I said.

"Did that stuffed animal just talk?" The man asked.

"Stuffed animal? STUFFED ANIMAL?! Haven't you ever seen a walking, talking child dragon before?!" I screamed. At that point, I was kind of getting sick of being reffered to as "a stuffed animal".

The man looked as if he was about to lose his mind. As the train neared its stop, the man ran out, screaming "It's a real dragon! It's an honest-to-god dragon!"

"I'm sorry, big bro. I made you look really stupid back there." I said.

"Akira, it's alright."

"I just...I just want my old body back so badly." I said, starting to choke up. Tears began to stream down my scaly face.

"C'mon, Akira. Don't cry. We'll get your old body back. So that guy wasn't the guy who drugged you. That doesn't mean we won't find him."

I sniffled a little. Then asked, "How?"

"Well I was thinking: What if we go back to the place where you were turned into a dragon? We might be able to find something." My brother explained.

"But...that was like three years ago. What if we don't find anything?" I asked.

"It's still worth trying, Akira. You do want to go back to being a human again, don't you?"

I nodded.

And so we took the train all the way back to the place where my transformation occurred. I tried to remember the exact place where it all began. We walked around for about a half-hour before we found where my transformation took place.

"Bro!" I shouted. "This is it! This is it!"

My brother unzipped his backpack and pulled me out. It felt good to stretch my legs after having to ride in a backpack for so long. My tail had its own version of a charliehorse. I screamed in pain a little as I wagged my tail around to try to shake it off. After my tail began to feel better, I walked around a little, sniffing the ground to see if I could pick up even the fiantest scent.

My brother laughed a little under his breath.

"I gotta say, Akira. When you sniff around, you look a bit like a dog." He said, jokingly.

"Shut up." I said. Even though he was right. I was basically the size of a dog now.

Just then, my finned ears picked up something. It sounded like boots. There was someone else here besides me and my brother!

"Well, well. If it isn't the little dragon from three years ago. How's life as a dragon been going?"

"Who...who's there?!" I responded to the omynous voice.

The person walked out into the light. It was the guy who drugged me! Even after three years, I recognized every little bit of him, right down to his intimidating grin.

"YOU!" I shouted in fear. My whole body began shaking.

"So you must be the guy who did this to Akira." My brother said. "How could you do something like that to a little kid?!"

"It was just a test." The man answered.

"A test?! For what?!"

"To see if my experimental drug would actually work. Glad to see it did." The man said, sounding proud of himself.

"But why did you need Akira? What's he got to do with this?" My brother asked.

"I didn't NEED him, per se. I just figured if anyone were naive enough to take candy from a random stranger, it'd be a small child. All I need to do was wait for him to leave the safety of his family. Then, when he was out of their sight, knock him out, drag him into the woods. And try the drug on him after he woke up." The man explained.

"Well...what would have happened if the drug didn't work?" My brother asked.

"If the drug didn't work...he could have died." The man said.

I was even more shook up now. Tears began to travel down my face again. I backed away in fear. After hearing that, I was now completely terrified of the guy.

"I told you I'd be back for you, little dragon. I'm taking you with me. You'll make an excellent research sample." The man said, getting closer to me.

"N-n-n NO! GET AWAY FROM ME!!" I shouted, rushing towards the guy. I jumped and headbutted the guy in the stomach. The man grabbed me by one of my horns, held me up so that his face met with mine, and punched me in the stomach. I couldn't stay awake and I lost conciousness.

I woke up a little later to the sound of my brother's voice. We were still at the place where we had our picnic but my sister and Drago were all there as well.

"Guys?" I said, still waking up.

"What happened to the guy who drugged me?" I asked.

"Well, Drago here saw the guy beating you up and attacked him. He konked the guy down the hill but..." My brother stopped.

"But what?" I asked.

"We don't know what happened to him. When we got down there, he was gone. But he did leave this!" My brother smiled, holding out a bottled test tube.

"What's that?" I asked.

"Well apparently, it's the antidote to turn you back into a human." My brother explained.

I smiled to myself.

"Thanks, guys. Really. But... I kinda like being a dragon actually. I didn't realize how cool it actually was at first. But I think when that guy was trying to take me with him, I actually felt pretty brave. I felt like a real dragon there. So...thanks. I mean it. But...I think I'm gonna stay as a dragon. I just like it better."

"Akira...then what do you want us to do with this?" My brother asked.

"We could take it with us." My sister suggested.

"Yeah. You never know. Akira may want to go back to being human someday." Drago said.

My brother and sister got on Drago's back as he took to flight. I opened my wings and flew off as well. I realized this was the first time I had ever really flown since becoming a dragon. As I flew, I thought all about what I had experienced since becoming a dragon. I realized that it was those memories that made me want to stay as I now was.

Two months had passed. My life as a dragon started to settle down since this whole thing began. My brother and sister are still the same as ever. Every weekend, Drago would take me to the spot where my transformation occurred and trained me to become a proper dragon.

As for the guy on the train? Well, from what I heard, the guy became so hysterical after seeing me talk that he was put in an insane asylum. That's all I heard.



Will a day ever come that I drink that antidote? Maybe. Maybe not. Only time will tell.



THE END
The conclusion to the Little Boy Dragon trilogy.

During the confrontation with the guy who drugged me, I had a bit of trouble writing what would happen from there and inbetween so sorry if it seems a bit weird.

Hope you enjoy the conclusion.
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Troll2410 Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
i'd just toss the antidote in a fire. and fly away
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HexenTheDragon Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It's like that drug, but probably Mixed into my food in a restaurant. And I would be larger. Like, 30 feet long from snout to tall.
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Dracocrystalwings Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice conclusion
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monstar211 Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I like how all the stories iv read from u are about turning into dragons
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Drake-Starfire Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014
Awesome story! :)
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william5678 Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2013
I would be a little bigger...
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:iconthenightfurydragon36:
I would never drink the antidote.
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AlsoKnownAsErden Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I feel kinda sorry for the guy who went crazy XD
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DrAnguis Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012
I honestly don't see how something as simple as that could make you go insane... I mean, seriously, he was a little runt as it was. I'd be laughing my ass off before ending up in an asylum from seeing HIM!
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transformationsrock Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2011
nice work
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billycosun Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2011
this was a good short series
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furrycactus Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2011  Student Writer
AWESOME!
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Anti-DragonHater Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2011   Writer
Great work on this! You are a great writer!
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SassyDragon18 Featured By Owner May 19, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Now that was a good story.
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Dragonboytf Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2011
Really good tf'd aftermath...
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cynderfan35 Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
Impressive and i would done same thing like the boy did. If i would become a dragon but find a way to become a human again i would not take it. Dragon is mutch better idea than being just human.... Nice story :)
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Uncle-Ben Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2008
Not bad. Nice and tight.

Can't wait to read more. :)
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Sammonaran Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2008
Yay! I loved every minute of it! *Insta-:+fav:*
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Felforth Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2008
Nice job but here is some criticism/suggestions your stories are very good but I can see a couple things I think you can do to make them better and more distinct from each other:

OK as has been stated above there were a couple what?!? moments in there. Try to lead the reader into it rather than just stating it immediately. For example you can have the character think about it to himself a bit more and have an epiphany or lead up to it throughout the entire story, but just making it come out instantly without any apparent basis leaves the reader feeling a bit confused.

Secondly: A lot of your stories have significant similarities. While this doesn't mean that they are bad, they are still very nice stories which I like, I think that you can make some changes to make it more interesting. You can change up the starting person, maybe make him older, younger, or female because most of your stories seem to be focused around preteen-teen boys.

Additionally you can change up your end results. The end result dragons all seem very very similar except maybe some changes in color. Instead try to mix it up, maybe make some dragons who are bipedal, have different amounts of toes/fingers etc... or you can just mix the focus you put on certain parts, maybe one story focus more on the legs and how they piece by piece change.

Beyond that you can also make up different ways that the person changes into a dragon. Maybe instead of fingers retracting into the hand/just disappearing make them fall out, fuse with the other fingers, etc...

Overall you sometimes do make changes like this but I think if you did even more changes it would greatly add to the uniqueness of each story. You do very well with mixing up the background for the change, try to do the same with the transformations and I think your stories can be even better than they are now.
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ManicWolf Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
Great story.

Nice conclusion.

His sudden decision to stay a dragon after wanting to be a human... WHATT!!!:O

That was very random ;).

Well done tho
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The-White-Dragon47th Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2008   Photographer
now after rereading this, i only have two words....FUCKING AWESOME
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Pocket-fulla-shells Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
I liked this (if i was in Akira's position, iw would have gulped down the antidote asap though)

I noticed that all your TF stories involved young children though. It might be nice to see a story about a young adult, or even a middle-aged person (35-50) as TF stories about middle-aged peopel are found few and far between
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bughadedo Featured By Owner May 3, 2008  Student Writer
i very muc
h liked it!
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Dustomega Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2008
so that bad guy just happens to drop the antidote and Akira's brother somehow knows that it is an antidote?
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The-White-Dragon47th Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2008   Photographer
probably because it said 'antidote' on it!
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kaliam Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2008
nize. That awsome!
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The-White-Dragon47th Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2008   Photographer
NICE!
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Bahns Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2008
The guy got sent to a mental asylum... I feel a bit sorry for him. Nice ending.
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ben300 Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It was good...

...but there is something I need to tell you. All the dialogues feels very...anime style. It's not a bad thing, it kinda gives you the feeling that your are reading something that comes from a classic japanese anime...but at the same time, it feels weird when put into a written story.

And one last thing...at first Akira wants to go back to human form...but then all of sudden, he wants to stay as a dragon. Don't you think that is decision comes a little...out of nowhere?

But this is just me, don't take this as an absolute truth. It's up to you to decided how you want to write your stories.
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ZItheDRAGON Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
grhagrhagrha I like ^.=.^
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